STEP ONE: THESIS
First question to answer: What are you
going to prove in your paper?
Essentially, you need
to choose one of these statements to guide your paper:
@ CHOICE 1:
What a person does determines what kind of person he/she is because he/she can control his/her
behavior with free will, making decisions based on his/her value system.
@ CHOICE 2:
A person's behavior is influenced by forces outside of himself/herself, so a person's behavior does not reveal the
kind of person he/she is.
STEP TWO: LOCATING EVIDENCE
Once you've decided on one of the above theses, the next task is to go about proving
it using the resources from Chemistry and English class.
- Night (First
resource)—find 3+ quotations that show the behaviors of the main people
in the book—be thinking about WHY these people behave the way they do; you
could consider Elie, his father, any of the people in positions of authority, or other inmates (Meir Katz, Akiba Drumer, et
al)
- Social Psychology Experiments/Texts—find 3+ quotations
about the conclusions of these studies—what do these studies disclose about human behavior (WHY people behave the way
they behave); You can choose from any of the following (you need to include info from at least 3!)
- Bystander Effect
- Asch’s Conformity
experiment
- Milgram’s
Obedience of Authority experiment
- Stanford prison
experiment—ascribed labels
- Blue eye/brown
eye video (labels & discrimination)
- Additional possible source: Schindler’s List—how do people behave in this
portrayal? Why do they behave this way?
STEP THREE: ANALYZING YOUR EVIDENCE &
DRAFTING YOUR PAPER
NOW IT’S TIME TO WRITE! (YAY!) You’ve found 6+ examples from the various sources. Copy the examples down, and write a few sentences about each one, discussing what the example is saying,
AND concentrating on what the example shows about human behavior . These will become your mini-body paragraphs.
STEP FOUR: ORGANIZING YOUR IDEAS
Reread your mini-body paragraphs. Group
the mini-body paragraphs into logical larger body paragraphs—quotation analyses that seem to hold a similar theme should
be grouped together. Once you’ve grouped your ideas, write a topic (main
idea) sentence for the body paragraphs.
STEP FIVE: INTRO & CONCLUSION
Draft an introduction paragraph. Include:
a. lead/hook statement (something to get people interested)
b. reference to the works you’re going to discuss
c. preview of your major supporting reasons
d. your thesis
Draft a conclusion paragraph. Include:
a. reminder of your major reasons
(new phrasing)
b. reminder of your thesis
c. final thought—something to keep the reader thinking