Core Values Essay 2012
Sophomore Class
Assignment:
Another essay! Hooray!
Topic:
You will analyze one of the characters you have read about
this year, as the character either exemplifies or does not exemplify one of the core values of our school.
EXAMPLE: In Lord of the Flies, by William Golding, the character Ralph is a perfect
example of pietas.
Core Values
Background Information:
A Roman citizen would avoid any act or
behavior that would dishonor the concept of Romanitas. He reinforced those qualities most prized within
the scared boundary of the the city: dignitas, gravitas, and pietas. These qualities of citizenship are the modern ancestors
of the words “dignity,” “gravity,” and “piety.” But our modern definitions, however,
pale in comparison to their Latin forebears.
·
Dignitas — fitness (for
a certain task), suitability, worthiness, visual impressiveness, distinction, rank, esteem, status, importance A person shows dignitas by acting in a manner appropriate to his social role. For example, students and teachers would
show dignitas by striving for academic excellence. Their dignitas comes from their accomplishments as serious scholars.
·
Gravitas — heaviness,
weight; seriousness, majesty; authority, influence or importance of a person A
person displays gravitas by approaching tasks with seriousness.
·
Pietas — dutiful respect
toward family, the city, the gods, the school
Length: about 2 pages, double-spaced
DUE DATE:
April 9, 2012 via email to Ms HB (by 11:59 PM!)
Characters You Could Choose From
Of
Mice and Men
Lennie, George, Curley, Curley’s
wife, Crooks
“Antigone”
Antigone, Creon, Ismene, Haemon
Lord
of the Flies
Jack, Ralph, Simon, Piggy
Henry
V
Henry, Catherine, Fluellen
Things Fall Apart
Okonkwo, Nwoye, Unoko, Ekwefi
Questions to consider:
1. Which novel will you discuss?
2. Which character will you discuss?
3. Is your character a GOOD example or BAD example of the Core
Value(s)?
4. How well do you understand the Core Value(s)?
5. Which quotations will you use?
|
Exemplary |
Acceptable |
Limited |
Deficient |
Ideas/
Content (20 points)
|
This
paper is clear and focused. The writing commands the reader's attention. Writing contains extensive and relevant details with
examples to support topic/theme.(20) |
This
paper is clear and focused. It holds the reader's attention. Writing contains sufficient and effective details with examples
to support topic/theme. (16) |
This
paper has a loosely defined topic, but may not be clearly developed. Writing contains some details with examples to support
topic/theme. (13) |
This
paper has a general topic, but is not clear. To extract meaning from the text, the reader must make inferences based on sketchy
or missing details. (5) |
Organization
(20 points) |
Progression
of ideas is logical and transitions are clear, effective and enrich the fluency of the writing. Introduction, body, conclusion
and format are excellent. (20) |
Progression
of ideas has some inconsistencies in unity and/or coherence. Transitions are clear. Introduction, body, conclusion and format
are good. (16) |
Progression
of ideas has major inconsistencies in unity and/or coherence. Transitions are poor. Writing has a weak introduction, body,
conclusion, or all three. Format is fair. (13) |
Progression
of ideas is difficult or impossible to follow. Transitions are missing. Introduction, body, conclusion and/or format are lacking.
(5) |
Voice
(10 points) |
The
writer is consistently aware of and connects strongly with the audience, presenting relevant details to the paper's purpose.
Writing reflects a strong commitment to the topic and is engaging. (10) |
The
writer is aware of and connects with the audience, presenting mostly relevant details to the paper's purpose. Writing reflects
a commitment to the topic and is mostly engaging. (8) |
The
writer is somewhat aware of the audience, presenting some relevant details to the paper's purpose. Writing reflects some commitment
to the topic. (6) |
The
writer does not demonstrate awareness of the audience, presenting few details to support the paper's purpose. Writing reflects
lack of commitment to the topic. (3) |
Word
Choice (10 points) |
Words
convey the intended message in a precise, interesting, and natural way. The words are powerful and engaging. (10) |
The
language is functional, even if it lacks much energy. It is easy to figure out the writer's meaning on a general level. (8) |
The
writer struggles with a limited vocabulary, searching for words to convey meaning. (6) |
The
writer demonstrates a deficient vocabulary, using incorrect words to convey meaning. (3) |
Sentence
Fluency (20 points) |
Sentences
are well-built, strong, and varied in structure and length. Writing has an easy flow, rhythm, and cadence. Writing contains
creative and appropriate connections between sentences and thoughts, showing how each relates to, and builds upon, the one
before it. (20) |
Sentences
are well-built, strong, and may vary in structure and length. Writing has flow, rhythm, and cadence. Writing contains creative
connections that build upon prior statements. (16) |
Sentences
begin the same way and follow the same patterns. Writing is more mechanical than fluid. Writing contains some connections
that build upon prior statements. (13) |
Sentences
begin the same way and follow the same patterns. Writing is mechanical, and lacks fluency. Writing contains few or no connections
between statements, and is difficult to understand. (5) |
Conventions
(10 points) |
The
writer demonstrates a good grasp of standard writing conventions (e.g. - spelling, punctuation, capitalization, grammar, usage,
paragraphing) and uses conventions effectively to enhance readability. Errors are so few that just minor corrections would
make this piece publishable. (10) |
The
writer shows reasonable control over an acceptable range of standard writing conventions. Conventions are sometimes handled
well and enhance readability; at other times, errors are distracting and impair readability. (8) |
Errors
in spelling, punctuation, capitalization, usage, and grammar and/or paragraphing repeatedly distract the reader and make the
text difficult to read. (6) |
Errors
in spelling, punctuation, capitalization, usage, and grammar and/or paragraphing continuously distract the reader and make
the text nearly impossible to read. (3) |
Presentation
(10 points) |
The
form and appearance of the text enhances the reader's ability to understand and connect with the message. It has a professional
appearance and fully conforms to project standards. (10) |
The
form and appearance of the text mostly enhances the reader's ability to understand and connect with the message. It has a
mostly professional appearance and mostly conforms to project standards. (8) |
The
form and appearance of the text somewhat enhances the reader's ability to understand the message. It has a somewhat professional
appearance and conforms to project standards. (6) |
The
form and appearance of the text does not enhance the reader's ability to understand the message. It lacks a professional appearance
and does not conform to project standards. (3) |
|